The fact that there is a reality
beyond what we see is scary. Each and every teen is carrying around with them a
“viewing glass” that allows the outsider to grasp but a glimpse of this. These
gateways into their world can range across many different types of mediums.
Three articles present a picture of some examples of different utilities teens
use to allow their world to be viewed and understood by others. In, “Film as Identity Exploration:
A Multimodal Analysis of Youth-Produced Films”, Erica Rosenfeld
Halverson describes the use of film in the lives of teens. In
"Adolescents' Expressed Meanings of Music in and out of School.”, the
authors describe the affects of music on teen expression, and identity
development. Also, in “Shifting selves: the struggle for identity and
spirituality in the work of three young women artists”, the authors observe and
describe how visual artwork can be used to portray the inner teen world. These three articles work together to show that if
the general populous actually took the time to look at and understand these
teen worlds, then they could influence teen lives in a positive way and even
deter them from making life threatening decisions.
Each
of these articles explores the concept of media expression, whether it is
through the use of “film to address complex issues of identity, particularly
the construction of a social identity” (Halverson), or the art of music to
“construct, negotiate, and modify aspects of… personal and group identities” (Campbell
et al.), or images that are
used to “[make] sense/meaning out of everyday life.”
In
Halverson’s article she emphasizes the different ways in which teens used
different aspects of the video making process to represent different kinds of
emotional aspects of themselves. From transitions, to camera angles, to
lighting, all these aspects of a single piece of work contribute to the big
picture of the inside of a teen’s world. Various things are portrayed through
these different aspects of film. Happiness, hurt, pain, joy, confusion, hatred,
the list goes on and on. All of these things make up the stewing caldron of the
teen emotional being. Sometimes, if this cauldron is not monitored, it can
spill over in destruction, damaging the lives of both the teen, and others
around them.
Similarly,
"Adolescents' Expressed Meanings of Music in and out of School.” Describes
the role that music, both made and consumed, plays in the identity of teens.
Using music as a “badge” (Campbell),
teens use music to place themselves in certain groups or associate a
personality with themselves. Some are stereotypical such as Emo kids listing to
Screamo, and smart kids listening to Classical music. Stereotypical or not, all
associations between the cultural definitions of music and personal definitions
of music based upon both lyrics and basic musicality, influence the ways in
which teens view themselves and others. The article goes on to describe both
benefits and disadvantages of active musical presence in the lives of teens,
giving the argument solid proof of validity.
In
“Shifting selves: the struggle for identity and spirituality in the work of
three young women artists”, the authors explore the vast world behind the
obvious of visual creations. There is depth and meaning behind something that a
teen creates. They go on to say that these issues of this world connect with
“questions and expressions of ultimate concern.” The big picture across all
three of these articles is that there really is something behind the obvious!
Every film, musical piece, artwork has so many underlying things that will tell
its audience stories upon stories of the creators’ lives. So, the big question
is, how does one tap into this spring of insight?
The
answer, clearly, is displayed in the very nature of these three articles. None
of these works has an anonymous quality to them. In each, the authors roll up
their sleeves and get right into the middle of the muck. Every piece of
evidence was gathered via investment. See, the only way to actually impact the
life of a teen is to invest in them. This is portrayed over and over again
countless times in these works. This is the key to the success of understanding
this world that is concealed to the outside view. There is only so much support
that these articles could give as to the actual “evidence” that is presented,
but there is so much more in terms of their methodology of finding this
evidence. There is no other way but to stick one’s nose into someone else’s
business and really start to figure out the pieces to the puzzle.
Whatever
the “viewing port”, art, video, audio, dance, poetry, literature, there are
many ways to access information about one of the most important issues in
today’s world. If one takes the time to invest in the life of a teenager, they
can understand their “world” and make an impact that will not only affect the
teen now, but long into the future.
Works
Cited
Campbell,
Patricia S., Claire Connell, and Amy Beegle. "Adolescents' Expressed
Meanings of Music in and out of School." Journal of Research in Music
Education, 2007. Web. 29 Feb. 2012.
Halverson,
Erica R. "Film as Identity Exploration: A Multimodal Analysis of
Youth-Produced Films." TCRecord: Article. Sept. 2010. Web. 24 Feb. 2012.
<http://www.tcrecord.org/Content.asp?ContentID=15948>.
McPhillips,
Kathleen, Peter Mudge, and Jay Johnston. "Shifting Selves: The Struggle
for Identity and Spirituality in the Work of Three Young Women Artists." International
Journal of Children's Spirituality 12.3 (2007): 233-47. Print.
I really agree with your argument! Your comparison to a teens life being one big, boiling cauldron is very effective and well placed. You did a great job of making me feel like i read the articles you were citing. I think it is important that you included the possibility of more than one "viewing port", seeing as obviously not all teens are the same. Your thesis is very clear and you made sure to keep going back to it throughout the essay. I did not notice any grammatical or spelling errors. Overall this essay is great! Hooray for doing a good job!
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ReplyDeleteThe thesis statement was that if the general populous looked a teen’s lives, the general populous could influence teen’s lives in a positive way. The context is general populous, subject is teen lives, claim is affect their lives in positive ways. There is a lot of evidence provided, but your analysis of why this evidence related to your thesis is lacking. Though artistic, the paragraphs do not connect well with the thesis; the meaning is implied and not explicitly said. Your writing is strong, but if you make the connection to the thesis for your reader, the essay will become even better. Be sure to restate your thesis in a different way in your conclusion
There were some sentence flow issues due to only minor mechanic mistakes. For example, in the following sentence, “From transitions, to camera angles, to lighting, all these aspects of a single piece of work contribute to the big picture of the inside of a teen’s world”, if there was a semicolon used instead of a comma after “lighting”, the sentence would have been more powerful and made more sense. This came up a few times in the paper. Your essay was well organized, but more transitions are needed as well. You use some, like similarly, but there are some paragraphs where the transition from one paragraph to the next is not clear.
Overall, I really enjoyed reading this article. It was very artistically done; however, the tone of the article is almost academic. With the words like “clearly”, “see”, and the random use of “!” weakens the academic tone. The topic was very easy to relate to. Your concluding sentence is very powerful. To the reader, it seems like you really care about this topic. It shows in your tone.